Remove your mask from fear - Quítale tu máscara al miedo- challenge of 100 days of Poetry-Day 70
Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 70, heading for 100. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the challenge of 100 days of Poetry summoned by #steemitschool and @d-pend. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.
My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: MUSE - Uprising
Remove your mask from fear
Repairing
doing a peeling
bright and lost
drowned in a black tulle.
Pale flame,
darkened,
crestfallen
blocked with a Cupid
of terrifying sigh,
of suffocating breath that
it is a weight
he has no plan,
does not fly,
falls without parachute.
Falls off,
falls off,
falls off
and
it takes you.
Your character is yours.
The mask also.
Do not let yourself be dragged.
Who do you owe honor.
Forgive what you have inside.
Enter in you
(Breathe)
(Fear)
(Despair)
(Life)
(Challenges)
Inhale, exhale the fear.
Destiny, legend, fear.
Flame, collision, fear.
has
power
to
unmask
the fear.
I'll teach:
you must
Inhale
deep.
Hug him...
¿You died?
Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 70, en dirección a 100. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el desafío de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.
Quítale tu máscara al miedo
Reparando
escarapelando
brillante y perdida
ahogada en un tul negro.
Llama pálida,
oscurecida,
cabizbaja.
Bloqueada, con un Cupido
de terrorífico suspiro,
de aliento sofocante que
es un peso.
Él no tiene plan,
no vuela,
cae sin paracaídas:
cae
cae
cae
y
te lleva
¡Tu personaje es tuyo!
La máscara también.
No te dejes arrastrar.
¿A quién le debes honor?
Perdona lo que tienes dentro.
(Respirar)
(Miedo)
(Desesperación)
(Vida)
(Desafíos)
Inhala, exhala el miedo.
Destino, leyenda, miedo.
Llama, colisión, miedo.
puede
desenmascarar
el miedo.
Te mostraré:
Inhala
profundo.
Abrázalo...
¿Moriste?
Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: III
May 16 , 2018
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
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For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.
And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.
If you have not yet joined the #steemitschool Discord, do it now:Discord
For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS
Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...
Face the fear indeed. Look inside and don't hide, inhale exhale release and you shall find peace. I like the markdown of this to give a solid effect. I thought that the picture of the woman unmasking was you at first.
Sometimes we must wear these masks to protect others:)
Oh yes, totally agree. The intention of the poem was captured, as always, with your sharpness, beloved poet. I wanted to convey that fear is one more mask of the many we put on a daily basis. If we raise awareness, we detract from it. That which paralyzes our interior also depends on us, in one way or another.
The use that you refer, about putting on that mask to protect another, is worthy of reflection and brings me a new perspective, which I had not grasped the point, but with a certain logic.
This type of poetry does not have many followers, but I feel that it is one of the poet's indeclinable functions: To be a lamp on the road.
A veces nuestros miedos nos paralizan y no nos dejan vivir cosas que pueden hacernos felices. Excelentes líneas hechas poesía. Falta menos! Ánimo!
Eso es cierto, Mary. Gracias por el apoyo.
may do run away from fear by hiding behind the mask,but it is a great thing to always face our fear. thanks for this great poem
Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this creation. I'm happy to have touched your sensibility, @riahdex. A hug!
Hi @zeleiracoredo,
Don't you see I am taking off my Guy Fawkes mask? Ja ja ja ja
Beautiful poem, excellent amiga
ha ha ha ... true friend @ayahkasih. You already discovered that lesson.
Thank you for this poem. Your wisdom shines into the darkest places. 😎
Thank you for the accompaniment, dear Stephen. I love that you have obtained something of value in this piece.