Rubber is an option - Rebotar es una opción - Challenge of 100 days of Poetry -Day 69

in #poetry6 years ago

Greetings, Steemians and companions from #steemitschoolpoetry.
We are on day 69, heading for 100. I thank the people who support me and who have read what I am creating for the challenge of 100 days of Poetry summoned by #steemitschool and @d-pend. Always waiting for your kind look and that you like them.

My musical theme that I connect to, between lines, with this creation is: Nightwish-The phantom of the opera

"If we discover a complete theory, over time it will be, in its master lines, understandable to all and not only to a few."

Stephen Hawking

Rubber is an option


Rubber

The movement and the transformation
latent are the bases for a new vision.
Combination that includes rubber
to create works that have an apparent balance,
hiding a universe of inherent variations
to its own construction with elastic forms.

Flexibility

Interlaced materials
in a provision that reformulates
the paradigms of the immobile.
The order and the possibility of change
are ready to start a dance.
That that moves on stage
is the possibility of touching the word,
appealing to its flexibility,
creating pieces that can almost bounce.

Illusionism

The magician becomes intoxicated with the old concoctions,
new tricks moves his hat.
Imbalance reconfigured through
the intervention of a spectator.
Always suggesting a meeting
where you can talk
with an external entity
or with the concept itself,
able to interact with the outside.

Poetry

A way of seeing life,
a stamp of our passage through the world,
with a galloping uncertainty,
or a constant hypothesis,
but, creating a powerful voice in poetry.
Hey!
Look at me.
Listen to me.
Bounce the idea,
Move the world.
It is not an illusion:
You are your poetry.



Saludos, Steemianos hispanohablantes.
Estamos en el día 69, en dirección a 100. Agradezco a las personas que me apoyan y que han leído lo que estoy creando para el desafío de 100 días de Poesía, convocado por #steemitschool. Siempre esperando su gentil mirada y que les guste.

"Si descubrimos una teoría completa, con el tiempo habrá de ser, en sus líneas maestras, comprensible para todos y no únicamente para unos pocos."

Stephen Hawking

cita

Rebotar es una opción


Rebota

El movimiento y la transformación
latente son las bases para una nueva visión.
Combinación que incluye goma
para crear obras que tengan un aparente balance,
escondiendo un universo de variaciones inherentes
a su propia construcción con formas elásticas.

Flexibilidad

Elementos entrelazados
en una disposición que reformula
los paradigmas de lo inmóvil.
El orden y la posibilidad de cambio
están listos para comenzar un baile,
dando paso a la posibilidad de transformación.
Lo que se mueve en el escenario
es la posibilidad de tocar la palabra,
apelando a su flexibilidad,
creando piezas que casi pueden rebotar.

Ilusionismo

El mago se enferma con brebajes antiguos,
nuevos trucos mueve su sombrero,
desequilibrio reconfigurado a través de
la intervención de un espectador.
Siempre sugiriendo una reunión
en el que puedes hablar
con una entidad externa
o con el concepto en sí,
capaz de interactuar con el exterior.

Poesía

Una forma de ver la vida,
un sello de nuestro paso por el mundo,
con una incertidumbre galopante,
o una hipótesis constante,
pero, creando una poderosa voz en poesía.
¡Hey!
Mírame.
Escúchame.
Rebota la idea,
Mueve el mundo.
No es una ilusión:
Tú eres tu poesía.


Original poem by @zeleiracordero
Reading notes: III

Source of images:
1
2
3
4

May 15 , 2018


Thanks to @d-pend and to #steemitschool for the creation of this space to share our creations.

And, very especially, to my invaluable friend @onthewayout.

If you have not yet joined the #steemitschool Discord, do it now:Discord

For accompanying me, reading me and always being there ... Simply THANKS

Por acompañarme, leerme y estar ahí...6985591ee86eebb8920d6ce133a86550 simplemente gracias.jpg

Sort:  

This is one of those pieces that is causing me to reflect. A part of it brings to mind a recent revelation that we, as humans, are walking around blind. This is based on the fact that we are seeing less than 0.5 per cent of visible light.

The same can be said about our poetry. Some of us are not certain what it is in relation to us.

Revelation is a key word in us that, from both words, we try to build messages that reach others, from within. Sparks come to us from what is revealed as a movie in our head.

Veery very cool photos! The cover photo is yours? Where is that?

I am sorry, @bitatlas. Had not responded to his concern. The photo of the beginning is not mine, it impacted me and I related it with what I wanted to transmit, but I do not know anything about that place. Thanks for the reading and the comment.

Bouncing is an option towards perfection.

Buena interpretación...

Este poema tiene mucha fuerza de voz e imágenes.
Saludos, @zeleiracordero.

Gracias por la lectura y el comentario, Sandra. Disculpa por no haber respondido antes.

No te preocupes, @zeleiracordero. A mi también se le pasan las cosas. En este medio la dinámica nos sobrepasa.
Saludos.

"Poesía

Una forma de ver la vida,
un sello de nuestro paso por el mundo,
con una incertidumbre galopante,
o una hipótesis constante," Excelente poesía, y excelentes imágenes.

Estupendo! Te sigo leyendo!

this is a great motivating poem, many are yet to discover the actual way they are viewing life as a whole

Being rubber is an option, but being a poet, flexible is a must or you'll be broken.

Good job, @zeleiracordero amiga

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.31
TRX 0.11
JST 0.033
BTC 64275.02
ETH 3139.81
USDT 1.00
SBD 4.14