Poetry "What did I do wrong?"

in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

#esteem

I am present with a handful of my heart With all the longing It's been a long wait Not at all you are rocking like a rock What did I do wrong? 😍😍😍😍 The night is getting older Wrinkles of the night are already pitched The spreading rot has gone out of hand Because no longer can throw stains 😍😍😍😍 Feel the night falling In the prostration of the prayer rug Tearful eyes Be aware of small self very small no meaning what - what

@GOOD-KARMA

#newlife #emotion #heart #esteem
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     6 years ago 

    I find you this style of this poem very unique, It breaks all the stereotypes of normal structure. I think it's cool!

    I'm new to the platform, so I'm saying hi to all the talented poets...

    Wishing You - Love, Light and Peace
    @whitelite

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