Promise (Poetry)
I am lost in this universe
Free but I am imprisoned
I have no place to hold me
And spirit dwells me
The touch moved rigidly Via
And you get me out of this silence
And Dunk I have no destiny
After you really burdens me
And your nearness is inevitable and mortgaged
I swim alone
And you are showing me your wings
Both ...... and no
This death will never be
Either with you or not
Even if I spent my life creepy
I promised you and I will not contradict
I am a man in the sense of masculinity
I am not a traitor and I am not afraid
Do not fatten this madness
But Oday was for you
Either I will be with you first
Interesting poem. I first thought it was acrostic, given that the letters of the first lines make "Hi fiat". Was kinda disappointed when I then saw no more pattern in it after, but nice poem nonetheless!
You're on a roll, my creative friend! I will upvote you for the moment with my left brain. The poem expresses so many painful questions. I hope your writing brings you to some answers.. this line, feels especially sad, and reflects perhaps a claustrophobic sense:
United!
Some of my writings about my life are the truth and some writings about the reality I see
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