Lyrics — Detours

in #songwriting6 years ago (edited)

I wrote this song quite a few years ago, at a turning point in my life… before making a big leap. Don’t have my guitar with me to record this, but I'm hoping @sircork will hook me up at the Nashville Steemit meetup next weekend so I can play this for y’all.

Let me know what you think of the lyrics!

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Here’s an old pic of me with the first guitar I bought…
I’m on vacation at the moment, so I gotta use what I got. ;)
It was fun climbing up in my beloved oak to get this shot.
This was pre-hurricane Katrina, before this tree lost a few limbs,
to give you an idea of how long it's been.
Wrote this song sometime around then...

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Detours — original lyrics by Katrina Ariel.


Excess excess you know I feel it,
Feel it from time to time.
Liquid and smoke in my memory,
Memories in my rhyme.

Drunken fingers trip over their strings…
Dark gravel voice slips her dress off as she sings.

I know that the magic’s in the moment
So I hold it there.
Then the present takes my imagination
And strips it bare.

But I’m still attached to my stories
I love to let ‘em fly,
So I swirl my reality in the sky…

I can be inspired in any state
Of mind in any space.
These detours have their place.

Breathe in breathe out
You know this body likes to play
Sway with the rhythm
Inside of me and I can
BREATHE it out.

But I gotta get comfortable with dancing alone.
If I’m gonna grow it’s gonna be on my own.

So excess excess let’s enjoy this time together
While we have it.
Singin’ my smoky sexy song voice
Thinkin’ in fragments.

Between these sliding words
I take a moment to think
‘Bout the impact of my actions
Then I blink…

I can be inspired in any state
Of mind in any space
These detours have their place.

(repeat x 3, end song)

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Hopefully I’ll get a recording of this soon, but the song was on my mind tonight, so I figured I’d share.

Thanks so much for reading. 💖💖💖

Take care of yourself, you are a gift!

Peace. @katrina-ariel

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Author bio: Katrina Ariel is an old-soul rebel, musician, tree-hugging yogini, and mama bear to twins. Author of Yoga for Dragon Riders (non-fiction) and Wild Horse Heart (romance), she's another free-spirit swimming in the ocean of Steemit.

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wow. heard your show on mspwaves last night. amazing. following. cant wait for more :)

ty for sharing

I can't move on from that tree and the blue guitar...can i wait for the song? 😉😉😚

Aw, thank you. It's such a stunning tree, even after having been so changed by the storm. I'm grateful I got that shot when I did. Glad you love it too! 💖

The world needs to climb trees more☺ A storm can do a lot of things and am glad it is still standing?? Our mango tree was almost uprooted but still bearing fruits🤣
Thu storms are constant and can be debilitating...still it's up to US..depending on how we are spiritually.

Yes, I think the world needs to respect trees more... climb them, hug them, enjoy them... stop cutting them down and plant more. Yes, last I checked (a year ago) this tree was still standing. It's a beauty. I'm glad your mango tree is still bearing fruit. Trees are so amazing, and they help me feel grounded—connected to this beautiful planet.

A friend cries when she see a dead tree. Do you know of the movie "Seraphine"? She's a tree-hugger.
We definitely need them for their usages, but if we cant leave them alone, we surely must know how to plant replacements. Ideally.

That tree is the most gorgeous thing. I love the lyrics. Some of those words trigger my own memories.

Yes, that tree is indeed something special. So glad you enjoyed the lyrics. Hope the memories were good ones. Thanks for the comment, my friend! 💖

Can almost hear the song. With your voice, I imagine it's beautiful!

It's quite similar in sound to "Still My Mind," actually. And, thank you! 💖

Lyrics are very lovely and I hope I can hear you sing them soon 💚

Thanks, sweet sister! I hope to share the music with you soon. ((hugs)) 💖

You've got the singer-songwriter pose nailed to a tee! Or should I say tree haha. If you ever debut an album that should definitely be considered for the cover.

Would be great to hear the recorded version - parts of it I can hear so well, other parts I feel I need some guidance. The message is crisp and clear regardless! Hoping that guitar finds you soon :)

oh. u said that. my read skills failing me today :(

Ha! So glad you like the picture. it's a good one, for sure! Yes, I'll try to get a recorded version up whenever that happens. Hopefully sooner than later. Thanks for the kind comment! 💖

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