My poem for... Mizu No Oto - Edition #27 [ESP/ENG]
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Pequeña barca
sumergida al olvido.
Rumor de peces.
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(An English translation)
Small boat
submerged into oblivion.
Fishes rumour.
Escrito originalmente en castellano con métrica 5-7-5. Presento una posible traducción al inglés, como pide la convocatoria... Para que la memoria del poeta, que reside en las palabras, no quede (como esa barca) olvidada al rumor de las palabras de otros.
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Originally written in Spanish with metric 5-7-5. I present a possible translation into English, as requested by the call... So that the poet memory, which resides in words, does not remain (like that boat) forgotten to the rumour of the words of others.
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Palabras que nos llevan hasta el lugar mismo @salvao
Pero no lo digas muy alto que luego los peces lo cuchichean... :P
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Buen contenido, poeta.
Gracias! :)
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Hola amigo, me fascinó tu haiku. Aquí te dejo un enlace que me pasaron para medir los haiku en inglés https://www.poetrysoup.com/syllables/syllable_counter.aspx
Hola! Por lo visto el 5-7-5 es la forma clásica, pero no obligatoria. Se debe mantener la brevedad, eso sí. Así que yo prefiero escribir en castellano y acompañar de una traducción para los lectores de habla inglesa. Saludos y gracias por leer :)
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Es tan viva el agua que, realmente, ahí parecen saltar los peces.
Me gusta tu haiku, contrasta quietud y animación.
Gracias amigo!
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Very nice haiku! Maybe, but I could be wrong, you could more correctly write "fish rumour", anyway I like it a lot.
Thanks! I like too xD Mmm... maybe could be fish and not fishes, learning better english i think