You Promised Me A Shade : A Freewrite.
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Promised me a shade
You told me this love never fails
Each day, comes home late
Drunk, tipsy, bringing no home pay.
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Promised me a shade
Days gone bye, promise fade
Who do I call now, no love again
Now in this love, no way.
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You promised me a shade
Dark and lovely, just like my mate
Proud thing to have, just like Dave
Nothing from you, even till date.
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You promised me a shade
I traded my love for what you say
Babies, twins, now on the way
Now I know I've been fooled, too late.
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You promised me a shade
Gave you my all, spreads my legs
Virginity popped out that day
Still, another girl you put in the family way.
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You promised me a shade
Won't you redeem it today
Wanting to end this promise and fail
Knife in hand, it's either you or me.
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An entry into @Mariannewest #freewrite
Prompt : Shade
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Wow. I didn't expect that ending!!
Wow. It must be hurtful to her to bring out the knife in the end. Superb writing, @ghenghisla.