… Revisited -Day 64 & 1/2 of the steemitschool 100 day writing challenge by @d-pend

So in the poetry class by @d-pend (held on Monday, Wednesday, Thursday at 1-3 Eastern standard time) my brothers Master Fro ( aka freakishly fluffy hair or @d-pend ) and Melon Lime Pomelo Cat (aka @geekorner) poked holes in version 1. Looking at the piece again I agreed with some of what they said with other things not so much ...but I decided to revisit the piece to see the original go Here
So I present here to you the reworked edition:

We think of evil as the obvious
the in your face
Brutal
Violent
Callous
Destructive
But there is an even greater Evil
that nourishes
feeds
bolsters
&
sustains
the obvious
it is the unspoken
unrefuted
the ignored
it festers
within engagement
the acceptance of
the compliance in
our blind obedience to
Those who do not
SPEAK UP
REFUTE
DISENGAGE
DISOBEY
RESIST
AND PROTECT INNOCENCE
are far worse then the
Obvious evil
Those behind the machinations of evil are few
We outnumber them tens of thousands- if not millions-to one
if we are not Evil
why does evil still exist ?
RESIST

Writing notes:

I realised that this part already encompassed some of the other things mentioned in the older version so they were right trimming the fat here was not a bad idea.

We think of evil as the obvious
the in your face
Brutal
Violent
Callous
Destructive

guy hated the whole piece ;) but he still loves me (hopefully no in the flea version though and he can keep his tapeworms too :P) but he was right that this part did not seem right he would have loved to have seen some things cut I belive it just needed a explaining instead of>

the engagement
the acceptance
the compliance
the ignored
the obedience

I did this>

the ignored
it festers
within engagement
the acceptance of
the compliance in
our blind obedience

And no I still do not want a title :P
Have some cats

_{(Image credit Dave Renike and a portrait of the fair jubilee made by myself turned into this here universal truth meme)}

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_{art courtesy of @PegasusPhysics}

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