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Oh shit. I don't like this one. Well written, ability not in question, but the story roils my ethical rage.😐 Mainly because I know it's true to life. 👿🤬 Dig the ghostly plot at the end tho😈🤙

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Ha, that's an awesome comment! Too true to life, for sure, in too many cases. I'm very blessed that I missed the 'curse' of abusive men that my family seems to choose!

I'm glad you have too hun, that would not be something easy to forget.

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That's some scarry shit right there. 👹

I'm not going Postal, just delivering today's prompt 📬

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https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-384-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-small-talk

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Started dark then got a lot darker! Well written and had me hooked from the start - lovely short piece here!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I have a ghostly theme going on way too often lately. I'm not sure what that's all about, but I suppose it's working!

Maybe you have an inner demon wanting to express itself through the medium of dark stories. Let it flow, see what happens 🙂

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I'm sure I have LOTS of inner demons, they often come out in my writing! I work through a lot of stuff that way, writing is my therapy.

Love it how we can provide a platform for those demons to come out. It's a blessing being a creative sometimes!

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haha! sweet revenge, I love it! I call that justice. Great job Bun!

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