Wow, there is some pretty complex stuff going on in the story. Just out of curiosity, did you change writing styles on purpose through the story? It was intriguing, It almost felt like two different people switching back and forth telling the story.
Awesome job, I hope you end up winning the contest.
Thanks for nice wishes. I altered the writing style obth willingly and unwillingly... I started writing this story two months ago, but I finished days ago. Also the topic for the contest was madness and I thought it would be interesting if both characters and narrator experienced irrational behavior changes.
And thanks for reading, it is really a great feeling when you realize that someone actually reads your posts.
lol, well it worked rather well, it's a technique that I will have to remember, not that I write much.
I did actually read it and re-read a part or two, I would get going and I would think "wait, what just happened" and go back a bit and then it would click... I think you covered the madness part well.
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This is a very nice story. I like stories from old Rome and Greece.
They were so afraid and at the end they destroyed their village themselves. Now, when they are on road, I wonder what will happen to them :) I like that your story is mysterious and kind of scary. You are a great writer!
How heartbreaking when your only source of hope is destroyed.
I love your story very much. Your characters are unique in their qualities. I loved getting to know them.
You know how to captivate the attention of your reader. Congrats on your curie upvote!
Prica je odlicno koncipirana, svidja mi sto ima dovoljno detalja da se stekne potpun utisak o ambijentu ali ne previse da bi udavilo glavnu radnju price. Definitivno mislim da bi ovo moralo imati svoj nastavak. :)
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Wow, there is some pretty complex stuff going on in the story. Just out of curiosity, did you change writing styles on purpose through the story? It was intriguing, It almost felt like two different people switching back and forth telling the story.
Awesome job, I hope you end up winning the contest.
Thanks for nice wishes. I altered the writing style obth willingly and unwillingly... I started writing this story two months ago, but I finished days ago. Also the topic for the contest was madness and I thought it would be interesting if both characters and narrator experienced irrational behavior changes.
And thanks for reading, it is really a great feeling when you realize that someone actually reads your posts.
lol, well it worked rather well, it's a technique that I will have to remember, not that I write much.
I did actually read it and re-read a part or two, I would get going and I would think "wait, what just happened" and go back a bit and then it would click... I think you covered the madness part well.
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This is a very nice story. I like stories from old Rome and Greece.
They were so afraid and at the end they destroyed their village themselves. Now, when they are on road, I wonder what will happen to them :) I like that your story is mysterious and kind of scary. You are a great writer!
Thanks for the feedback, I'll surely write one more story about two Romans, and MANY more stories set in the ancient times :D
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How heartbreaking when your only source of hope is destroyed.
I love your story very much. Your characters are unique in their qualities. I loved getting to know them.
You know how to captivate the attention of your reader. Congrats on your curie upvote!
Thanks for reading it, sometimes the only way you can move on is when you have no hope in staying, that's why I made it that depressing...
amazingly well done and the fact you did side by side translations like that is a good idea and glad to be in Trojan Wall
Thanks, I hope we'll get back on track soon!
Prica je odlicno koncipirana, svidja mi sto ima dovoljno detalja da se stekne potpun utisak o ambijentu ali ne previse da bi udavilo glavnu radnju price. Definitivno mislim da bi ovo moralo imati svoj nastavak. :)
Hvala na mišljenju, biće nastavak sigurno. :D