Ulog #17 - Sunshine and A Poem

in #ulog6 years ago (edited)

Hi all! I'm feeling a little under the weather today so I thought I'd share some sunshine and a poem I wrote.

This shot reminds me that no matter how tattered I feel the sun will shine and nurture my hidden beauty.

This shot reminds me of childhood adventures through the woods and fields. It makes me feel peaceful.

I've decided to take a crack at writing poetry again. I'm a little rusty.


Strewn with seeds
My path veered hard
Around a shining pool.
I leaned and stretched
To glimpse myself
But only spied a fool.


I peered behind
The seeds were gone
Scattered in the wind.
The day turned dark
And thunder cracked
It shook me from within.


My vision dimmed
My senses dulled
A bubble quickly formed.
I floated along
Through the woods
Protected from the storm.


Goddess I prayed,
I've lost my way
Take me from this night.
The bubble burst
I feared the worst
And sprang into the light.

I hope you enjoyed this but honestly if you have any constructive criticism feel free to leave a comment.

Until next time friends...

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i hope you feel better my dear artemis! loved your photography and lovely poem. i especially love that you your Bitmoji is chubby. don't ask me why but it makes you real and cute and cuddly.

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I'm admittedly biased but she is cute and cudly.. always has been :)

@pathtosuccess awww so sweet, who are you? hehe must be the papa? LOL

naw... look down to her response to my comment ... you'll put it together

@pathtosuccess i thought i responded to this already, this darn fast reply. yeah i wont read down, got too many comments to reply too.

Thanks! My bitmoji is chubby like me! My grandkids think I'm cuddly too..LOL!! Thanks for stoping by.

@artemisnorth hehe, i figured that to be the case and how adorbs! xoxo

nice poem @artemisnorth .. good to see you writing one again.

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I DO!!! It's beautiful!! :P hugs

and the flowers are too!! thank you needed to see those too!

I'm glad they helped you too!

Your post lifted my spirits dear Artemis, I hope yours are too! Enjoyed your poem...great ending. 😊

Thanks!! Great to see you stop by.

Beautiful shots and Poetry I hope you feel better soon

Thanks! Coming from you that's a great compliment. GRIN.

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I love the poem! Especially the last stanza... sometimes it's darkest just before dawn. much love!

Thanks so much!! HUGS!

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