Finish the Story Challenge! - Sleeping with a stranger

in #writing6 years ago (edited)

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Sleeping with a stranger

She closed the door gently, but couldn't lift her hand from the knob. She leaned against the wall, frozen, with the confused expression of someone who forgot why they walked into a room. She pushed the door back in slowly, careful not to make any noise, held it there for a few seconds, and closed it again. No! she thought. Go, please go! Her legs started moving awkwardly, like they had forgotten how to walk. She pressed the button for the lift, but couldn't get in when the doors opened, and stood there motionless until the doors closed again. A note! Maybe I should go back and write a note! She started walking back quickly, so that reason wouldn't catch up with her.

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But it was not the reason that persecuted her, that memory of the past was frequently made, a message maybe she wanted to say, the truth is that that night her life would change. When Rachel woke up in the middle of the dream, a strange smell was felt between the four walls; small instants returned to his memory as if the past wanted something from her. She looked through the window at the drops of rain falling nonstop, Rachel could not To fall asleep this time, at the side of his bed his husband slept quietly, a light illuminated for a moment the darkness and a strange shape was projected on the glass of that window.

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Rachel felt watched, she turned her gaze in search of that which disturbed her, she only found darkness in that room and a chill on her back, as she left that space she slowly walked to the loft, a strange and mysterious force was guiding her without having control over her body, the experience was terrifying and amazing, the ambien was cold and with a thick air, the little light that it offered did not help in anything in that room, there was something that wanted to stay hidden, What secret was behind that door? It was sealed by planks as if someone as if someone wanted to keep it closed forever.

Rachel he took the plank and pulled it, but it did not move, insisted on throwing it again, but it was perfectly nailed, and went to the corners of the loft looking for an object with which to remove those wooden boards, the dusty environment did not facilitate things, breathed with difficulty , the nervous and desperate movements became more and more complicated, in a last effort the wood fell off with a dull thud when falling to the ground, only lacked two, the third plank it fell easily and Rachel bathed in a cold and uncomfortable sweat tried to turn the lock, but it was closed, remembered for a moment about the old and strange key that had saved time ago, A strange force motivated her to enter despite the fear she felt in the middle of That place, Her mind was confused, something told her to stay away, Rachel managed to open the lock and tried to find the switch on the wall but when trying to turn it on, I saw that it did not work, she he still felt the strange smell.

With the low visibility Rachel could find a chest whose content left her much more bewildered, to see old photos of husband with another family, as well as letters that did not make much sense to her, suddenly she in the middle of her search felt a strong blow that came from behind, the world began to spin and like a sack collapsed, When Rachel was able to regain consciousness, she was sitting and tied to a chair, she had a tape that covered her mouth that prevented, her from screaming, in the middle of his desperation tried to observe his surroundings, until he heard a voice that seemed very familiar -¡Rachel you had to find out everything!, I always told you to stay away from the loft, now you will accompany Mery.

In front of Rachel was sitting in the same position rotten and dry body with of Mery a repulsive grimace and the sockets of the empty eyes, while Rachel was drowned in the middle of the bitter and fetid smell of putrefied flesh, the door closed again and the planks finally they returned to their place.

"That secret place had to remain a secret"

By:@edurley

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aqui mi apoyo

Hola amigo, agradecido por esa receptividad, aprecio mucho tu tiempo,feliz noche.

Excelente @edurley gran trabajo

Gracias amiga, un abrazos y saludos, agradecida de corazón por tu gentil apoyo.

Very good message, I congratulate you.

Agradecida por tu apoyo, saludos y feliz noches.

Una historia sin duda misteriosa! buen post

Gracias amigo por visitar mi post y tu valioso tiempo, saludos.

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