Hello Out There!

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I dedicate this poem of mine to someone somewhere who may be bereft of hope and feels that life isn't worth living. It is titled "hello out there"

Hello out there!
I hope you'll hear,
No one seems there
That's what you fear.

Hello out there
Listen with care,
I'll be sincere
If only you'd hear
She left you for another
He cheated on Fiona.
Your heart begins to wander
Your mind pauses to ponder,
Until it gets so bitter.

Life seems more like a bother
You wallow in much misery
You give in to self-pity
You soak yourself in pretense
Each day begins to make less sense
You put up a strong wall
One which seems not to be broken by all
You are bereft of options.
Death seems like a noble action

Hello out there
You may be broke
You may have lost hope
You can't seem to cope,
Life may seem bitter.
But never so forever.

Even if you suffer
Never always waver,
Let your feet not hurry
So you wouldn't be sorry,
Let your feet not falter
For someday things will get better.

Hello out there
pick not that rope
Pick not that knife,
You will be fine.
Just give it a lifetime.

Hello out there
Drink not that sniper,
Though mixed with water
Yet strikes like a viper.

Hello out there.
Suicide is not an option,
Choose it not as your portion
See life as a gift,
Not death as a treat
Live for something.
Don't die for anything.

Written by:
@goodybest

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What a great poem! Well done.
HOPE, the one thing that gives us a purpose in life.
Life is indeed worth living 🌼

You're absolutely right my dear friend, hope is like an anchor ⚓ and as you rightly put it, it keeps us going. How do you do ma'am?

I'm fine thank you my friend. Just battling the power cuts this side of the world. We were down 12 hours yesterday.
I trust that you are also doing well.
PS: I miss the days before the engagement challenges, when we were so active in Steemwomensclub.

Just battling the power cuts this side of the world. We were down 12 hours yesterday

Oh No I can imagine I you feel, hope power has been restored now. It's good to know that you're good, I'm doing great over here too.

Truly I miss those old days too, I hope things will fall back in it's place

We just need 1 month without engagement challenges.. just one month (•ิ‿•ิ)
PS: Nope, power cuts still on, was 8 hours today. Apparently it might go down to 4 hours from Monday. Fingers cross!

How sad 😭 steemwomensclub is no more but we will keep going, yes forward ever. I personally hope to be more engaging, yeah let's revive those good old days.

I hope the power will get better than before. Once again sorry for the shortage

It is indeed sad but yah, maybe we should start another one.
Nearly midnight here by us.. good night! Sleep tight! 😴

Wow!!! I love this poem, it's so comforting and heart warming

Thanks my lovely Sis, I'm glad you liked the poem, how has Life been with you?

Wow I love this poem, it is really cool especially the last point.

Hello out there.
Suicide is not an option,
Choose it not as your portion
See life as a gift,
Not death as a treat
Live for something.
Don't die for anything.

You are very right

I'm glad you liked my poem, thanks for visiting my blog

A very nice, educative and informative poem which has ginger and race more hopes to me

Thanks for such a beautiful poem my dear @goodybest

Aww I'm glad you find this poem to be uplifting, the anxiety of this life really weigh down a lot of people, but hope will help us to see life on a brighter side. Thanks for stopping by dear friend.

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