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RE: knot eye

in #abstract5 years ago

Greetings, dear @d-pend!
"Knot eye" contains an interesting poetic proposal illustrated with photographic images alluding to what is being proposed.
I feel that the knots are the barriers, the obstacles that life imposes on the future, on dreams. Something dark has been planted before the vision of what was planned:

twists that fathom themselves
sideways into obscure passages
who did not exist
a mome before.

On the other hand, more sensitivity has been gained, more capacity for compenetration with the whole environment at the very moment when an energetic exchange between "everything" and "one" occurs, a kind of empathy that sharpens the senses and makes us more vulnerable to our perceptions. Something that the voice internalises as retrocession, because it returns it to processes that it thought had been overcome and, nevertheless, they return as knots seeking to be untied.

all things with a sentience—
a brevity, said gravity
of a vessel shaped-stunted,
shattered,
stolne.

And it culminates with a kind of acceptance of what has been happening inside, dumped on the outside, when the sentence is passed:

all in the cosmic shade,
the lamplight of aeons:
illuminates striations
emerging with the eye.

I am fascinated by the image of the wire fence with the illusion of falling into a dive like a roller coaster. Very good and coupled effect, that recreates the raised in the poem. Well done!

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