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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - The Mystery of the Smiling Pilot

in #adsactly6 years ago

This could actually be made into a novel :-)

I liked the story and although it doesn't follow a linear story line but its been executed pretty decently. But what grabbed my imagination the most were the characters. Of course we only had a few short pages to build the premise and that characters but they were executed beautifully. Their fears and hopes, their imagination and delusions, accusations and the truth, its all out their for the readers to enjoy.

The story shows that sometimes what appears so real and important to the eye may not be so real in the practical life. Our own perceptions can lead us to conclusions that might not be true. What was previously proven as the truth may actually have been false all along.

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You have put it perfectly. Things are seldom what they seem like and nothing in life is black and white so even when you are sure that you know, a second look does not hurt anyone.

I am so grateful that you took the time to read my story. You are appreciated for the long, articulate comment you left.

Thanks man! It was a pleasure to read your work :-)

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