Need help with my BTC pitch i will include the email I wrote and any ideas on how to refine or develop. Thank you
Background: during my last class with my dad teaching solar I boutgh into a crypto currency for $13 each and i bought 10, it was called Ethereum (ETH) and yesterday this coin was worth around $220 for a short while. This has fully funded my participation in the wagerr ICO (Initial coin offer, wagerr definition below). So I want to get some info out to you because there are hundreds of investment possibilities and while 1500% increases in a day are happening, the overall growth has been long and very steady.
major coins
Bitcoin (BTC) Ethereum (ETH) Litecoin (LTC) Dogecoin (DOGE) Ripple (RIP) Dash (DASH) some alternative coins STEEM (STEEM) Potcoin (POT) Solarcoin (Solar)
Ill start with the long version, here is the basic youtube.
Ill get to the hiistory later but basically oiginally they were used to trade a currency for gift cards (CC scams) and remove money from transactions where having money would be a problem. This was a huge demand much larger than anyone had anticipated. This is what kept bitcoin alive until last year. Last year the trust in the USD was comppletely lost, leaving space open for any currency a person could think of to steal that faith.
In the most recent future most country governments have addapted and accepted bitcoin as a formal currency making it the new world standard and completely out of the control of the American realm of control. Exposing United States Citizens to soomething we are very uncomfortable dealing with, Inflation.
Heres the superbowl paypal commercial created to bring even more awareness but was never aired at the superbowl.
Now to today on may 25th there is an ICO Initial coin offer, but this is a revolutionary idea and is applicable worldwide, so I am collecting BTC bitcoin to participate in an early sale starting may 25th-june1st to secure maximum bonus on all investments. heres a sheet of what an ICO looks like they all come in a form similar to these and all promote different ideas.
Here is the best explaination of the Wagerr ICO and a great blog site for bitcoin and cryptocurrency information.
https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=1911583.0
Thank You
So any ideas way to make is smoother or pop more, any feedback is much appreciated.