ADVENTURES IN THE WORLD OF SOLITAIRE (ORIGINAL BOOK BY @DARKFEMME) PART 4

in #book6 years ago

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I wrote this book a few years ago and I have still had the opportunity to publish it, it is my country it is a bit difficult to get any publisher to consider a book to publish it when it is from new authors like me.
Today I wanted to start sharing my book on this platform to protect my copyright and give me their opinion about it.
I'm going to publish it in several parts to avoid making too long texts and annoying them with a whole day of reading.
I humbly present my book:

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For see the first part press here

For see the second part press here

For see the third part press here

aniela kept silent watching the market, had never seen a thing like that, it seemed like a trail of ants that carry food to his hive. After he fed them and offered some beds to rest, Cristian went immediately to ask the princess to receive them. After he left, Nicolas angry with Daniela for his bad manners scolds her and she responds.
fter having cleaned up she went to the room where they were waiting for her. They spent a week in the fantastic castle (at the direct request of Princess Melany), and during these days, Daniela and Cristian knew each other deeply and discovered that among them there was a stronger feeling than a waterfall and that each one separately was like a vase without flowers and that together complemented each other in such a perfect way that it could last beyond time, spreading its wings to lift the endless flight, which goes beyond the horizon and the infinity of the Universe. At the moment of leaving and having prepared everything to return to Chinicha (his native village). Nicolos, Claudia and Daniela say goodbye to everyone in the castle, but Cristian decides to accompany them to be close to his love even if he had to leave that fabulous place. ater, Nicolos asks the Princess the way out of the Soltaire World. She, in a show of gratitude, gave them a battalion to guide and take care of them. They left without haste. hey toured the Celestial Forest, passed through the Coral Waterfall and, as the Bridge of the Winds was damaged, they lengthened their route until passing through the Violet Rockies, until they reached the Soltá Creepers. In those mysterious landscapes, lived a terrible beast that was fascinated that the strangers never returned to their home and using any method for it. The Captain of the Crystal Battalion ordered the Distinguished Garci'a to get ahead to check the area. After a while there were some hurried footsteps approaching, everyone was alerted and suddenly they see a man mad with fear that was staggering from one side to another and Nicolas held him.
    -What's wrong Manuel?
    -It's hurt! -said another soldier.
    Oh my God!... -Daniela exclaimed and approached him saying - What happened to you, how are you?
    -It's something horrible! -He shouted and holding the shirt to Nicolas- It's close, you must go now, now!
    -Who? What is Ruiz talking about? -Captain Ojeda asked.
    -The beast! -He answered trembling- It comes for them, it does not want them to leave, it does not want to let them out!
    -Then... You have to leave immediately! -said the Captain addressing those boys he was protecting- Come on, we're already close!
    -Come on! -Claudia said holding Nicolas by the hand.
    -Yes, hurry!


mong the shady bushes and dark trees, mildewed by the humidity that prevailed in that place was not yet observed around the exit of the World of Soltaire, only the crickets were heard to sing; so much silence made everyone more nervous, but this changed suddenly, because from the depths of the forest there was a loud roar that resembled several sounds of some animals in one (the neighing of a horse, the howling of a wolf, the purring of a panther and others that could not be easily identified). Everyone felt terrified and the Captain ordered:


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    -Fast pace boys who are already approaching!
    Upon hearing this, they all ran after the Captain.


ut everything was suddenly silent again, after passing Nicolas and Claudia through the portal the beast appeared and held Daniela in its grasp. The soldiers started and Cristian, desperate to save her, launched himself at him, causing him to throw Daniela away (but not before hurting her with his claws), leaving her for a moment unconscious.

ow the monster is sitting on the ground, still alive but moaning in pain, throwing swipes with his sharp claws as if he wants to kill all his aggressors, he was now dying, afraid of his end, alone and without being able to feel the pleasure to see his opponent without a blade of life. Daniela, seeing that the battle against that ferocious animal had ended, desperate ran in search of Cristian with the anguish that the sharp claws of that monster had reached him. She was disconcerted and with a pain that penetrated to the depths of her being, she looked desperately at the well-trained and strong mens of the Crystal Battalion, lying on the ground, badly wounded and asking for help.

fter a few minutes, Daniela lost herself in the fact that her gaze, already diffuse and in some cases deceitful due to excessive exsanguination, forced her to hold on to the trees to walk and on several occasions her knees gave way. Suddenly, she sees vaguely that through the bushes, among the darkness that reigned there, was observed a light of impressive beauty, which was what aurora borealis, rare and inexplicable. Before that wonderful and surprised radiance.

    -The exit! Again before her - she said confused - and now... What do I do ?, I keep looking for my love although for that reason I can be closer and closer to death and away from my friends or I go to save my life and go home.


hile she was thinking, I was very worried, I did not know how to help her, I felt helpless and it was reasonable because, so far away from there, what was I going to do? I had to settle for seeing how his destiny would continue through the magic sphere and wait for him to make the right decision. After a moment, when she was sure of what she would do, she said tiredly and in a faint voice:

    -I'm sure, I'm going to...


nexpectedly the bell was heard in the classroom indicating that it was time for the students to leave and then the teacher who was reading said:


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    -Well boys it's time to go, keep your supplies and do not forget to do your school assignments -she said, saving the story and hanging his wallet on his shoulder.
    But the students were still sitting in their desks and one of them told him:
    -Teacher!
    -Yes, Andrés... -she answered.
    -Are not you going to finish reading the story?
    -It's time to leave.
    -But, teacher -another student intervened- Are you going to leave us halfway?
    -A teacher, finish reading it -begged another student.
    -Hey guys, -said the teacher- tomorrow I finish reading.
    -But teacher, are you going to tell us how it ends, right?
    -No -She answered.
    -At least give us a clue.
    -You are always impatient to leave, so we are going to do something, -said the teacher complacent- You think what you would do in your situation, you will bring me tomorrow written in your notebooks a possible end of the story and tomorrow we talk about it.
    They all stopped and went home without much agreement with the teacher's decision.


And here ends the fourth and last part of this story. Thank you for taking the time to read each chapter and I hope you enjoyed it.

This story that comes to an end! Best Regards!


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Para contactarme en Discord Chat en español https://discord.gg/wCgeVke
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o búscame como DarkFemme#3243
or find me as DarkFemme#3243

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Las imágenes fueron creadas por mí con ayuda de mi hija. Las que busqué de internet tienen su fuente.
The images were created by me with the help of my daughter. The images that i finded in internet i take your sourcer

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