Gabrielle du Noir y poesía #3
Hola! espero que estén bien. Mucho de ustedes han sentido lo que es la pérdida, desde algo tan efímero como unos audífonos hasta un ser querido... ¿Pero y si fuera una mascota?
Esto lo escribí frustrada al no saber como salvar a un pequeño perrito de una camada...
Sin mas que decir espero que les guste el poema, que aunque odie la prosa (no pienso que sea mala solo que estéticamente no me gusta el sonar al leer) terminé rimando estos versos.
Requiem a un pequeño por Gabrielle du Noir
Hay una vida que
es libérrima, hay una
vida que no atisba
el sol.
Una vida que
vale cada alhaja
por una que no.
Es una pena no haber podido salvar al perrito. Sentimiento bien representado en los versos.
gracias por comentar, y sí, hicimos lo que pudimos pero su estado era grave y el muy pequeño (nunca abrió los ojos)
Qué triste. Es mejor pensar que no era para este mundo.
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