诗两首:江陵 & 金陵

in #cn7 years ago (edited)

最近的假期和家人一起去了两个城市,一是湖北荆州,又名江陵,二是江苏南京,又名金陵
我们主要游览了荆州古城旅游区和南京夫子庙秦淮风光带。
走访历史遗迹,心怀无限感慨,遂作小诗两首,今日上传Steemit,与大家分享。

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《江陵一梦》

梦里化身作刀客,

鼓角铮鸣响战歌。

千古风流终成唱,

成败皆往为几何。


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《夜游秦淮》

六朝金粉榭歌台,

十里烟波暮尘埃。

轻舟徐行别桥岸,

灯火珠帘客杳来。

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Thanks for sharing. Followed. Pls follow me

这完全都没有格律是不是?

理工男的渣渣小诗,见笑了~

随便吧,整个steemit上的人写诗都没有格律的哈哈哈。抛去这个因素,还是很有感的两首诗!

姐介绍几个诗人给认识呗,想学习学习~~

我加了好多qq群你有没有兴趣?

我看行,让我也熏陶熏陶,日后写出了干货也不枉费Tvb姐的一片栽培,嘿嘿

你写得挺好的,炼字、章法都挺好的,就是没有格律哈哈。你要有兴趣可以加我qq 49964441 我拉你进群,一起学习。你炼字比我好!

说好的诗这么快就来了

哈哈,没啥韵律,纯属自娱自乐~~

现在能写成这样的诗,已经为数不少了 厉害了word哥

嘿嘿,确实为数不少~~

感谢您分享您的假期图片,他们是罚款。 亲爱的你的假期 来自尼日利亚只是倾向如何写中国愿望我可以学到更多。 但你相信梦想和轮回

Definitely worth an upvote and a resteem :)

Thank you! The first resteem of my article~~

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