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RE: A Moody Monday - constrainedwriting

in #constrainedwriting • 6 years ago

wa-a-a-ait, why was the father behind bars?
There's quite plenty grammar mistakes here, to the point I have trouble understanding many sentences...
Regardless of the grammar mistakes, though, I like the idea behind the story, it's dark and full of emotion.
You surely do have a creative mind! ^^

Thank you very much for your entry!

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     6 years ago 

    Like my friends always do, you should have point out one or two of those grammatical errors, I'll appreciate.

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      wouldn't find a work to do.

      we all know the two of them has had a shop where they run there their trade

      for she knew I used to check on my friends before school

      To date I still wonder till date how some mathematical formulae were made.

      This is just a few... The structure of your sentences is actually quite.... odd.
      Mainly because your sentences are made too long. Use fullstops instead of commas more, unless you're really really really describing something.

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         6 years ago 

        Thanks, I'll put this into consideration.

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