This is better than your previous one Marco. The description of the entity reminded me of The Colour Out of Space. The fact that everyone's level is quite high, makes me wonder about how important is the initial setup of a story in comparison with its development.
The initial setup is fundamental!
My next step will be to pay more attention to the style of writing...I would like to write endings in the same style of the setup (lexicon, pacing, sentences...) I know that's probably too much difficult for me, but I want to try ;)
I thought about a couple of other solutions, but this was the strongest I could imagine 😁
This is better than your previous one Marco. The description of the entity reminded me of The Colour Out of Space. The fact that everyone's level is quite high, makes me wonder about how important is the initial setup of a story in comparison with its development.
The initial setup is fundamental!
My next step will be to pay more attention to the style of writing...I would like to write endings in the same style of the setup (lexicon, pacing, sentences...) I know that's probably too much difficult for me, but I want to try ;)
I feel you!