You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Win 1.5 SBDs in VDux's Haiku Contest About Horror (just in time for Valentine's Day)View the full contextmermaidvampire (72)in #contest • 5 years ago Broken pieces of my heart, Lie with me in bed, Each torn piece still calls your name.
@mermaidvampire welcome! So glad to see you here. You are a shining, steeming star!
We only do traditional haikus, 5 syllable first line, 7 syllable second line, 5 syllable third line. Can you revise?
Hahaha! My bad, I thought the meter is 7-5-7. I kinda felt I was messing it up. Hahaha! Thanks, I will try and revise. This made me a good laugh. Hahahaha!
Hahaha!
Roses are for bees,
Don't even think chocolates,
Hate diabetes!
Great!