My nomination is the Smooth as Silk freewrite by @wordymouth:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@wordymouth/smooth-as-silk

I think he does as incredible job of setting the scene in such a short space; you can feel the heat and energy in the church. There's also a real sense of the narrator's innocence and it calls up more than a few questions about a situation that's outwardly prosaic and straightforward.