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RE: Life's chaotic suite

in #dsound6 years ago

@d-pend,

A SONNET ... bravo!

Perhaps it's my current obsession with Harfork 20 and its ramifications, but my mind is making this poem all about that:

Errant mana streams of laundry strewn,
Rooms abandoned to unnerving hours.

Quickened fables flit or willing fade,
Left with pithy phrases, empty all.

Chaos, sentry rhythm, blameless mass:
Cluster of sweet comfort within noise.

Beautifully written. Masterful craft. Daniel, you are a damned fine poet. Wordsmithing is most certainly your artistic forte.

BTW ... I just noticed the changes to your blog header. Had a good laugh. Gallows humor.

Quill

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