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RE: Flourish-lines (original poetry with reading & challenge!)
Stanza one corresponds to image number 3
... taut spiral
Stanza two corresponds to image number 1
Delicate fuzz of infant's hair
Stanza three corresponds to image number 2.
Always-living, curl of towers
Stanza four corresponds to image number 4.
Thy fount autumnal, goldenrod
The beauty of this poem is in the strong personification and metaphor inherent in the last two lines of every stanza and the connection with the poet persona.
Congrats, you got it right, but two others answered before you :-)