Another good piece with some unique instruments, and a groovy, generally polished sound. Also, the addition of the backup vocals is a BIG improvement, and the additional effects (reverb, etc.) are also helpful. Two things I can see you working on next are the RHYTHME of the vocals/lyrics. For instance, the "Mirror, Mirror won't you leave them alone" line has good rhythme, whereas some other section seem to have some superfluous syllables which could be cut out to add simplicity/grace to the vocals. Of course, this is just my opinion. Ultimately, I think it is a matter og having not (yet) found your REAL VOICE, which is where the lyrics will come most naturally and harmoniously out. Every great band has had a lead singer who tapped into their REAL VOICE. I mean, what would "Guns N' Roses" be without Axl Rose's REAL VOICE, right? I think that some vocal/voice lessons woul be helpful in this regard... I've tweeted this one out here : https://twitter.com/TranscriptJunky/status/1005251313662382080