Not bad @captainzek! Would like to suggest that you put a voice over on this as it makes it more relatable!

Also, would be great to see that you uploaded to you tube in order to reach a larger audience

If you think its useful, you might include your @Steem.Ninja instant sign up referral link in the description so that you can get rewarded for each new user that you onboard as a result of your video! :) steem.ninja referrals