Hey, @jocelynlily, this is excellent - the "product testing" scenario, the not-too-distant-future setting, the physical, emotional and psychological detail. There were moments when I felt I was there in the room. I'm new to steemit, only been here a day or two, and I'm exploring the platform to try to decide what kinds of things I'd like to write. You are an inspiration to me and I'll be following you, looking forward to more. Thanks!