This definitely reminds me of stories pertaining to the Cthulhu mythos. The style of delivery and the enigmatic conflict the presents in the story. No resolution but more trivial questions that come and make no sense. It is one of the best depictions of writing horror and you did a good job portraying horror for the unknown on this one.

Not exactly happy that there is no clear answer to what and why of the story but that's also something that makes this story great as it is. If the horror was resolved, it wouldn't be memorable anyway? Congratulations and job well done.