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RE: Quitting Life...

in #fiction6 years ago

Oh this is a really good ending! I love how she is older, and still hasn't done it yet, this is most certainly not an ending I had thought of. It changes to focus of the whole story to her dilemma, with real skill you have resonated on certain notes from the first half, and it works beautifully. The dust bit at the start did make me wonder, but you spin this so well. Thank you so much for this amazing ending!!

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It really wouldn't have worked without your perfect beginning.
Yours is a talent I aspire to 😘

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