Hatred, Contributed by @Olawalium

in #fiction6 years ago

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She hated her father and she was not too keen on her mother either. She loves her only brother, David and always spoiled him, even though the number of years between them is longer than a rope.

She is an influential lady, glamorous, rich, and generous. She would do anything to make others happy and she doesn’t joke with her friends, even though she seems not to have too many of them.

She is married to a handsome man, Ray but they are not with kids. She likes keeping her circle small, so she knows most people but only close to a few. She is none other than Tara.

Tara is a philanthropist and currently working on her reality TV show to celebrate her 50th birthday. When people see her, apart from her numerous goodness, the first thing that comes to mind would be “she is an angry woman”. She lashes out at will. She lashes out under little provocation. She doesn’t take too kindly when things are not going her way. She likes keeping to her time.


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Most of her small circle of friends have been used to this angry part of her, so they just keep quiet but her husband has been the one feeling the brunt of this. Ray would prefer to stay up late at night before coming home, just to reduce the bickering at least and other times he won’t come home until early hours of the morning, to have his bath and change for work.

Not only is Ray doing this, he has taken another woman, Joke, under his wings. He is sexually involved with her, since his wife, Tara wouldn’t always make love to him. The wife suspected this and would feel insecure anytime she sees Ray speak to any lady.

Behind her seeming anger, you would see a lady broken, bent, and struggling. She wants to be better but she found herself sinking more and more. She has no one around her that she could fully trust, not even her husband. They have been like this for a while now and it doesn’t seem to get better anytime soon.


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She stayed up in bed thinking about her once loved-up life with Ray. She wanted to go back to that life but something was holding her back. The more she tried, the more brick wall she sees and the more pain she feels in her heart with tear soaked face. Since her husband hardly comes home, she takes solace in her pillow. Her pillow absorbs her tears until she has no strength left and she slowly drifts​ into sleep.

...to be continued...

Thank you for your time.


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I really pity the girl Tara, she is frustrated and running out of love. I think she really needs help at this stage of her life.

This kind of emotional state is very dangerous, and is commonly happened to women because they allowed so many things to be going on in there mind at a time.

She probably needs someone who will patiently showing her love till she recovered her emotions back. It's a bad state of emotions because, it scared people away from you. View people will wants to associate with her. She really needed help, if not the situation will be worsen

Thanks for sharing @communitycoin and @olawalium

Always good with the analysis and depth. I always appreciate your kind and wonderful comment.

Yes, when we have so much pain in our hearts and those pain go so deep that it constantly pop up in our mind, we tend to lash out and it overrides our good part. She has so much pain in her heart.

Thank you so much for your kind words @olawalium. But the thing is, good post will always attract good comments. You have done fantastically well to produce a good and quality content. And that's why I also tried my best when commenting.

More grace to you sir. .....

I totally appreciate your comments and also you, as a person. Thank you so much. Much appreciated.

She is her own help first. I see some Alpha nature in her. But element of pride is ruining everything too.

Really enjoyed this part. Hoping to catch the continue! Wondering how this is going to play out. Hopefully she can find peace... we shall see!

Yes, we shall see. It's true, we all seek peace and happiness and i can only hope so too, for her.

Thanks for joining in and for your time. I really appreciate it.

What an interesting story, where you describe a woman's life and personalities

Yes with deep hurts and memories. Thanks a lot for your time. Always appreciated.

Just can't wait to continue reading your story, am falling in love with it already hahahah, thanks for sharing @olawalium and @communication

Your kind words means a whole lot and it delights me more knowing you enjoyed it too. Thanks a lot. Always appreciated.

He can not see his father in the night, how can he see his family, and his family can not see anyone, he has to stay away from his own children, because of his anger only because of his anger that when he realizes he is angry because he is angry He goes to the series but he can not afford to be angry because he can be found to be one step by step. Back to the back of the shares .If a person understands the ball from one another then he can be kept memorized, but he can not correct his mistakes because the people around him are friendly and the surrounding society will let him do it.

I totally cannot relate to what you are saying my friend.

I only understand from this, that the anger from hatred can confuse both the hurting angered person and everyone around them especially if they aint talking about it. Am not sure tho. Lol.

Another great piece from olawalium

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot.

Loved the flow of the writing.

Really glad you did. Thanks a lot.

Yet another beautiful piece again.
But what could be this restraining factor.
Waiting eagerly for the continuation.
Quite a suspense.

Still Elisedaniels...love for the Gospel..

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