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RE: Return Home - a Father-Son Short Story by A.E. Jackson

in #fiction5 years ago

I'm glad that this is just a fiction even though I can imagine it would really happen as it does sound real. Meeting your father by accident after so many years and let him ruin your life. I wonder what happened before and why they didn't meet each other for such a long time as father claimed he didn't know about his issues.

It's a very sad story as normally parents want their best for their kids but this father seemed to ruin the chance that his son had. Or maybe he was thinking he was doing a good thing in his sick ways.. who knows.. and then he kicks him out.. a 'perfect' parent.

I like how you write. There is no exaggeration, the words are just flowing and the story is developing smoothly. Great job!

Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your curie vote! :)

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