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A good way to find out is to join a Discord channel with a fiction workshop (and free critique and feedback): https://discord.gg/KgVeGe
Your story is worse than Old Yeller. Never thought I'd hear myself say that.
{{ shuddering }}
Well written, yes. sigh

thank you for the vote of confidence here...I think LOL. I knew that this story was going to be one that upset a few people...hell, I read it aloud to my wife, just to see how it sounded. It was hard for me to do....the emotions tied up in this event have been with me for a long time.
I joined the Isle of Write Discord too. Hopefully I can get better learning form you all.
And wow...worse than Old Yeller huh.....I must've done something right lol

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