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RE: It Awakens - Finish the Story Contest
@anixio my friend.. this is a piece that offers great ideas, mostly about the setting: the tesseract being produced by nature, the sudden silence and the obsidian face. Did you check what a tesseract is? What is the Kunst in the "Kunst Meister"? Where are the other 18 tesseracts? What exactly is the sand made of? I think that, after reading your story, I got inspired and will give to these questions an answer..
@f3nix I'm really glad that you liked it and that the story inspired you. I always see that as an great achievement. To be honest I don't know what Kunst is in the "Kunst Meister" nor where are the other 18 tesseracts.
I know what obsidian is and what tesseract looks like (the shape of the object) so I got the picture about the sand and how ideally it must have been created so decided to add a little dose of supernatural to it.