RE: Leitner - My Ending for the FTW #46 Prompt
They sought to escape the power of flesh, the curse of being human. And their strategy?
Rituals of sex and poppy.
Here you earned my full attention. There's a good allegory of contemporary times.
Benjamin wandered off to his destination, ignoring her.
This is the point where I imagine there will be a cultists' carnage (writing this in real time, I still don't know the end).
“Melinda,” he said. “This doesn’t have to end with your blood.”
How come, no carnage? Mmh now I need to see that blood painting the cave's walls. I'm still confident about the bloodbath.
The first cultist stabbed him well enough.
Ok. Carnage granted. He's a supernatural being.
Benjamin gripped Melinda’s wrist. “Time to take a swim.”
My thirst has been quenched at last! But but.. here's the Dirgelian touch. He will sacrifice and drag his perverse beloved with him in the river. Nice, a dark-romantic ending which transports the reader in a perfect gothic Stokerian atmosphere. This is indeed the ending.
tried to contain it all within the usual word limit
I didn't feel forced passages