Please note: My story ran 772 words. Feel free to disqualify it from prize contention. I just wanted to write the story and wasn't worried about the prizes.

Duly noted.

I think this was almost my ending of the story. In all honesty, you may have written beyond the suggested limit but the story flew way better than others, making it seem shorter. I appreciate the lexicon, not forcibly elaborate and fit for a enjoyable story of love and rebellion.