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RE: Jenny, Is Your Bed Still Empty? Part 3.
Your story was very graphic @jeezzle. Do you like writing romantic fiction? You painted a very clear picture of your almost sexual encounter with Jenny after you smoked cannabis. I felt like I was there lol.
This is a really good short story. You painted a great picture for the reader. The beginning was a little confusing, but after a few paragraphs I started to catch on!
Damn women, they are crazy sometimes!
I don't really like writing romantic fiction that much but you never know what's going to come out sometimes.