The ticket

in #fiction6 years ago (edited)

The window was dirty and she was wondering how many people had already poked their nose against it. She could see so many clouds passing by, in the most calm and peaceful way. Clouds that looked happy, clouds that were ready for change.


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It was her first time in an airplane. Up until now she had only dreamed about experiencing a moment like this. Flying to somewhere was only for other people, not people like her. Not for people who didn't have a dime for spare.

But that changed last week when she found a ticket on the floor. As it later on seemed: the golden ticket. It was just laying there on the sidewalk having no owner, no place where it came from. She decided to pick it up and take it with her. She had looked around her to see if anybody had lost anything. But nobody was noticing her. As always, she was just blending in to the scenery.

She waited for a couple of minutes to see if anybody came for the piece of paper. But nobody came. Later that night she was watching the crackled television from their neighbors house. She did this from her regular spot standing inside the neighbors garden and looking through the window. As always the neighbor was watching the 8 o clock news.

She hated the news. Always only more wars, drama, fighting, money and other stuff she didn’t like. But it was at least watching something. The feeling of having something normal and steady in her life. At her own house she would never have this feeling.

Every single day she would be reminded that she was only an extra mouth to feed. And that she would only be useful if she was born as a boy. Now she was just too much. She never understood why this had to be mentioned so much. As if it was her fault that she turned out to be a girl.

There wasn’t money for anything at home. Not for food, not for clothes, not for school, and certainly not for anything fun in life. But she had dreams. Dreams which she had seen on the neighbors television. About nice places with smiling people. People who were laughing. People who were enjoying their lives. She loved seeing that.





The news ended today with the story of a lottery ticket that had not been claimed. And what the winning number where. Feeling the ticket in her pocket still she decided to take a look at it.

Everything went so fast in the days afterwards. She had told the producers that she did not want to be on the television to be recognized. Not because she did not want the fame, but the guilt was eating her. The guilt of that somebody else did not win.

The clouds in the plane were staring back at her. Some moments it almost seemed as if they were talking to her. That she was a cheater, that she had stolen somebody else's future. But actually what she had done was only pick up the ticket from the floor. Because other people found themselves too good to look at the floor. And she took a sip from her fancy, bubbly drink and closed her eyes.



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I can so totally feel this girl ... I would have done exactly the same thing. Good write!

In the end I think almost everybody would be sitting in the plane right...

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A golden ticket, yes, it's nice one and the girl although feeling like she has cheated someone, but she did wait to check whether the real owner of the ticket comes searching. So isn't it that it's not her fault?

Appreciate your command over words and I felt happy reading that.

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She did the most wise things as possible with still being able to look herself in the eye I think right?

Thank for the compliments bro!!

Well, yes, she did what she felt is good. You are welcome.
Infact, I should be thanking you as I got to know about SMG community and I have applied to be come a member of the same :)

Echt misschien moet je toch je beroep ervan maken !

Ghehehehe, nehhhhh.. Zo is het leuk voor af en toe, maar om 40 uur per week inspiratie te hebben zou me toch wat lastig zijn :D

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There are just so many things I love about this story. :) Beautiful visualization - it TOOK ME THERE. Maybe you can make guided audio visualizations ?? A new income stream. You have the knack. :)

Guided audio visualisations??

What is that then? Is that where somebody explains how the surroundings look like or something like that?

Yep. I would totally be sipping champagne. 🍾🍾🍾🍾

Ow yeahhhh...Id be in the lounge while still even being on the ground :D

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