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RE: Chasing the Thrill of Fenn's Treasure (Fiction, Part 3)
@donkeypong, I think both persons of Brody and Carlos found more information about Fenn's Treasure. But they protect their secrets and don't said each others coz Carlos was random person. But I feel this is wanna true story. You built up conversation each others like as live stream. I prefer to discovering parts because there has risk condition to life. Risk is big experience to us. Thanks for the third chapter.
Glad you liked it. Dialogue is not my strong point, but I do my best with those scenes.