You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Finish the story contest entry
Nice ending, but I would like to see at least a stint of rebellion in Sarah. the quiet acceptance of her fate, decided by an absurd society, shows me that even in the forest she's still a slave
Thank you! Simply representing the way I see humans behave. If a few people should happen to see a flaw in her reasoning... well honestly that's a bit of a relief lol