Hey,
What a great short story. This really took me in and i am intrigued as to what will happen next. Congrats on the curie upvote, hopefully you'll get some more visibility on your work. I've also re-steemed this on the @steemsearch blog
The Curator
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Thank you very much for the pleasant surprise. It tells me that my writing legs may just be forming.