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RE: Leitner - My Ending for the FTW #46 Prompt

in #fiction5 years ago

Well to keep fair... Hey wait you are the prompt writer, so I can blabber on about your prompt and what not :D - but I shall not to keep fair with my other comments on these set of stories~

La forma (The form): Well let's start with the fact that yah made the story and it got @curie upvoted, so congratulations on that!~ Also thanks for saying all our stories/endings were nice to read, it was nice to read them all as well. Now I do just wonder how each of us inspired yah a bit or made yah consider some revising of the ending yah had in mind even when yah got that post ready. Moving on from that side derailing, I like the biblical allegory picture at the beginning of the post; giving us a flavor of what to generally expect. Of course, having the post structured like a FTS entry really is a nice touch for those in it and a surface-level exposure of FTS story structures to those not in the know. Also, the international version of that is FIN because we support our fins and the club of finny-fin things!~

La filosofía (The philosophy): Some will just laugh me off for thinking stories are clearly biased thanks to the author. Well I just laugh them up as I am still floating in space wondering what the Heck I am doing. Regardless of who's the better chuckler, I do like to follow up a comment I left for, methinks, @agmoore's post. Finally a cishet writer that doesn't resort immediately for the male character to brutally shank a female character to death. Especially in a setting like this were dozens are killed a pop a dime (Victorian era tropes with Macabre poems and husbands constantly killing or in the process of killing their wives). Though someone will scream "the end, the end, she dies at the end!" I like think they just took a lil' swim in the pond with all the fishies floating about c: - Of course, no matter how immortal your blood is, Leitner practically was walking towards it knowing full well he was going to die anyways. Plus the legacy was already shattered, might as well become anti-Dracula (oh hi Alucard) and start feeding into the infernal machines of Capita- let's save that talk for another time with how at least the ending's ending relates to and references "Caliban and the Witch" by Sivlia Federici with how the remaining vestiges of any cultural tingles of Matriarchy were smashed with Witch hunts which aided Capitalism greatly in Europe at least.

So keep on writing and happy steeming!~

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it was inspired by this kind of character
https://dota2.gamepedia.com/Abaddon

What's with everybody I ever talk to in love with or inspired by DotA2! It really must be a good or interesting game.

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