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RE: Prompt: Slug (a five-minute #freewrite)
The festival description gave me a vivid reminder of the carnivals here, until the older lady decided to do things we have never dreamed; that i definitely do not see everyday.
Nice job
Thank you!! :)
Yes... Harclyffe Cove isn't the nicest of places. In my original description of this chapter, there is no festival. We only have a brief recount of Lyria's journey before she ends up in the tavern. Originally she had witnessed four brawls, two murders, and uncountable women beckoning for her to join them in back alleyways where carnal melodies could already be heard.
Now, with this festival in mind, I can add more flavour and depth as well as the original plan! :D
We don't have such festivals here, but I've seen videos of the festivals in other countries and cultures, and I think I was mildly inspired by them. :)