50 Word Story Challenge: SEA
Seas of green
Seas of blue
Seas of strawberries too
Dive deep into my soulless eyes, many oceans empty with a curse.
This battle from the skies hit the water with much force.
Sending waves of infinity, destruction will prevail.
And all I can see now is
Strawberry fields forever.
To participate in the 50 word story challenge created by @jayna, check out her post that shows the guidelines. You can also check out other peoples stories she has shared in her post. ^_^ Happy writing!
It's really touching! Thanks a lot for sharing.
I forgot that we can also do poetry in this challenge! I'll leave it to my next entry.
I actually didn't see if we could use poetry or not. I wasn't sure if this was considered poetry as I am far from being poetic lol. I just used the words that came easily to mind. Glad you liked it ;)
Did you write one? Last time I checked there were only 2 entries so far. I will go check again.
Poetry is absolutely fine, @alexandered and @foxyspirit! The form does not matter, as long as a story of some kind is told in 50 words.
woohoo!
Wow, that gives me some things to think about! I love the first two lines so much:
The wording is so sparse and powerful!
p.s. I really fell behind in reading entries this week. Sometimes the work week is crazy and I can't get to them. I apologize that it took me several days to find time to read your story!
Thank you ^_^
No apologies needed, there are a lot of entries and you also have a life. Never be sorry for having a life <3
That was gorgeous, depth and beauty mixed up into a lovely fiftyword cake :o)
thank you very much ^_^
Another great one, @foxyspirit! I love the ebb and flow of the words as they take you on this journey.
Thanks! I would love to see you join this challenge. You have such a way of writing that I know you could just blow us away in 50 words. Feel like giving it a try?
I may need to dip my quill into this ink well...lol. do you have a link or guidelines?
Here you are: https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/50-word-story-challenge-week-in-review-and-new-prompt
It is interesting to see what other people come up with. The word to use in this 50 story word challenge is 'sea' :D
Thanks for sharing the word, @foxyspirit. Hope you join us, @papacrusher!
Absolutely! Not sure if you have read some of @papacrusher's stories, he is an amazing writer. I am still loving that zombie story he wrote :D
Stop you're making me blush! Lol
This is my favorite. :)
:D hey Dawn! Glad you liked :p How are you? I know you are busy and with that I hope you are good and healthy and enjoying life ^_^
Life as usual but I'm doing well. My part-time needs more time so I've been on and off here. Hope you are doing well too. :) Take care!
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What a lovely post, resteem’d.
Thank you ^_^
Yer welcome. Yer pretty good.
I like the pretty creative slant you took on the prompt here @foxyspirit :)
Thanks! It just reflected upon some of the thoughts and emotions I have had that day ^_^