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I hope you enjoyed it

I did indeed. It's very sweet. I see this as a bittersweet story of the very first loss in life. We suffer many of them throughout our lives, amidst all the joys and trials and personal growth and everything else that life sends our way. But losses are a part of it all. A baby's first loss is becoming a singular being after nine months of being one with its mother.

Excellent! That's what I was trying to convey throughout my story...

Although it is a loss, it does not represent the end, but the beginning of a new experience (light), from there we start to write our own story (history)

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