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RE: What are books? - A Fifty Words Story

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Interesting how you focused on telling the effects of the book in a story-esque atmosphere. To give life to them and draw them cartoony instead of stating outright (look I hate the phrasing "tell" and "show" with a passion, since "showing" is just a more fancy and nice-looking version of "telling"). Anyways, you go with one scrawled with information of some scandalous information. To then the religious texts being adored, for which the people, who were compelled by their perception of the book, saw it as an easy social justification for their bloody actions. Upvot'd.

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Thanks for your in depth and understanding commentary @theironfelix.. Much appreciated... I was a little all over the place, but not easy to capture it all in 50 words :o)

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