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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #39 - @bananafish
I like the way you pick up the theme of blending dream with reality.
he began to acknowledge the laws that governed that world and how to bend them to his creative power
So... a famished feline consumes the thieves. Vartran rides home with the bounty of two saddled steeds. And mocking Xaltan gets hit with a pie in the face.
Skillfully played.
A pie in the face, a joke that will endure eternity. Thanks for the comment.
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