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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #28 : Death in Silence
Well done! I remember when this was current events, not history. You capture very well the web of alliances and betrayal that were confusing to outsiders at the time. Also, the violence, which seemed pointless (still does). This is an action-packed, believable scene that follows logically from @theironfelix's beginning. You didn't need to know Spanish to do a good job :)
Thank you so much Agmoore! It was fun fleshing out the reason for her revenge and although I had a basic outline there was a few changes when I read some of the history of the Shining Path and their MO in their attacks against government and civilians.
Violence is pointless and when one uses it instead of discussion how different are we from animals