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RE: Part 2 by @sevendust04 - Finish The Story Contest - Week #48!
You managed to pull a hat trick--you fooled Matt and you fooled the reader. By creating a ruse, using the vernacular that had been adopted in the first part, you lulled us all into thinking the story was going in one direction. Then, boom--it turned. Good job. I always like a good surprise. If the expected happens, why bother reading?
Welcome to Finish the Story. Don't believe I've read one by you before.
Thanks. Yes, it's my first Finish the Story. I've done one microfiction for @jayna but I wish I had time to do more. With all the OT on my job and the 2 kiddos (6 year old and 4 year old) I don't have much free time. But I'm enjoying the writing, I haven't had much practice since college.