Finish The Story - Week #46 - Winners!

in #finishthestory5 years ago (edited)

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Hoist the colours, proud fiction writers!


Well, my word, we had a brilliant round! Still @calluna here doing some freelance henchman work for our limitless leader @f3nix, you really let the wind fill your sails this week, and we had such an amazing selection of entries.

We saw Melinda team up with Kauffman and Wolfstone, take on the role of pure mother-murdering villain, show her fangs as a vampire, and her skills with the darks art - as an amautuer overestimating herself, as a loyal witch, and even leading her own band of dark wizards. In some stories she fell by the wayside, a side character in a larger epic, others she took centre stage, and in just one, she left as a very obedient wife! And what family secrets... Benjamin had quite the adventures, facing his wife in many situations, and coming off quite well in the end.. in the most part!

This was an ending that could’ve gone many ways, and the roller coaster you all took me on was truly thrilling. Thank you <3

You all gave me a real challenge in judging. I ended up having to go through a few times, and found it so hard to narrow them down. I had my top picks, but couldn’t decide what way round they were, and a huge tie right behind them. So, you ask, how did you ever decide Cal? To try and chose between the final selection, I went back to the intro, and I highlighted the key points to pick up, and I went back and counted how many points each entry hit. The same entries tied at the top, and I yet again had a tie for third, thankfully @dirge weighed in with his selection, and we have our winners.

Another three @curie votes this round, and yet again so well deserved! Congrats to @darthgexe, @vasigo and @sarez we all really hit a high bar this week, and it’s once again shown in the high number of curies! A quarter of the entries!!!


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  • Curie factoid: we have been supported by the amazing Curie community with 55 upvotes in 46 editions. ** We are on the up and up, well over an average of one per edition now, reflecting the amazing work you guys do!**.
    When it comes to the curie count, @brisby and @cyemela are still tied out in front with @sarez hot on their heels!

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... And the winners of this potassium laced edition are:


  • GRAND PRIZE - 5 STEEM: @gaby-crb
    Gaby was already such a talented writer when she joined our ranks, and she has really come into her own, she has gifted us plenty of wonderful endings, and even an opening of her own. A very well deserved first place, that addressed so many of the elements raised in the first half, side stepping expectations and tying the blackmail into the truth of the family history, there was so very much in here to love. Powerful dialogue punctuating a well paced plot, packed full of perfectly painted moments, for a prize stealing ending!

  • SECOND PRIZE -3 STEEM: @seesladen
    Finding the threads in the first half is always a huge part of the challenge, not only did @seesladen do this (matching gaby on points tied up) he changed the first half, realising the space between the words that only implied Melinda was a wife. The way this ending mirrors the opening is so skilfully done, filed with so many touches that just really make it. @seesladen is a master of going out on a limb, and it really paid off here.

  • THIRD PRIZE - 2 STEEM: @sayury
    There was a real struggle for third place, so many entrants that wrote fantastically, so many that really hit the points in the first half, in the end, the prize is going to @sayury, imagination and a well thought out plot, spattered with such beautiful imagery easily conquering any language barrier in this brilliant ending.

  • POPULAR VOTE - 2 SBI: @agmoore
    This was a strong contender for the top three, and a very well deserved popular vote, giving this story of the dark arts and beautifully light.


  • BEST COMMENT - 3 SBI: We have a tie! @theironfelix once again graced us with a sleuth of lengthy, considered comments, addressing entries on various levels, congrats felix! 2 SBI winging your way. But Felix was not alone, a resounding welcome to @darthgexe who not only gave us a brilliant ending, but also left so many wonderful comments, all my tops picks for best comment were from these two, and in the end, I couldn’t decide, so added an extra 1SBI to the pot, so congrats @darthgexe 2SBI for you!



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Congratulations to the promoters of this contest, to all the participants and to all the winners. I am very happy with that third prize and that you have valued my work so well. Thank you

You're welcome @sayury! We hope to read your fine fiction writing again and congrats 😁

Congratulations to the winners! more than deserved recognition for providing such good stories.
Thank you @bananafish for the SBI, I appreciate very much that you have added it to reward my comments.

It's such a serendipitous event when we can enjoy a new brilliant writer like you. Steemit is not abundant of bananafish creatures at all and you're one of them! See you in our 47th edition!

It's wonderful to know that my fellow writers liked my story. I trotted out a little German ditty just for fun, and it worked. You never know. I once made up a word on a German quiz because I liked the way it sounded. Turned out, it was real word (nimmermehr). I guess what that means--have fun, take a risk and be creative.
Congratulations to the winners. They shine among the stars on finish the story.

Nice how nimmermehr sounds like never ever.

take a risk and be creative.

This is where creativity shines and produces the best results, when we think out of the ordinary. Cheers!

Good work everyone. Congrats to the winners, runners up and all the bananafish stalwarts :)

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It's always a pleasure to see you writing with us, matey!



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Congrats to all the winners. Sorry I wasn't very active this past week I really hope to read most of the stories from the next one.

Hi @stever82, never mind everyone is active when it's possible. Your presence in the contest is always a cool plus. See you tomorrow and I hope you'll like my prompt on edition #47. Cheers!

Wooo thank you :D
It was such a good first half to run with
Just gonna do a happy dance now

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Huzzah to the winner!!
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My hands are full but great job, everyone.

(Good, he's clearly applauding the hypnotoad)


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